保护地球的英语作文定稿

April 17, 2021, 8 a.m. 文档页面

【文章导读】Preserving Our Planet The earth, the only mother of human beings, is now facing a great threat-environmental pollution. Therefore,

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PreservingOurPlanet Theearth,theonlymotherofhumanbeings,isnowfacingagreatthreatenvironmentalpollution.Therefore,itisimperativeforallofustoprotecttheearth,forsheistheonlyhometoallpeoplelivingonit. Throughouttheworld,environmentalpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreseriousasaresultofvariousreasons.Firstofall。

therapideconomicandsocialdevelopmentisproducingalargeamountofpollutioninformofgas,wasterandwaste;.Besides,Peoplespoorawarenessofenvironmentalprotectionisalsoanotherimportantfactorcontributingtoenvironmentalproblems.Forexample,alargenumberofpeoplehavedevelopedthehabitofusingplasticbags,disposablechopsticksandpapercupswhichdogreatharmtoenvironment。

What’sworse,manypeoplearecuttingdownincreasingnumberoftrees,causingsoilerosion.Inaddition,themanagementofthegovernmentalsocontributestoseriouspollution.Therefore,wemustimmediatelytakeeffectivemeasurestopreventtheearthfrombeingpolluted. Livingonthisbeautifulplanet,wemustactivelycontributetobeautifyingtheenvironment。

Itsimportanttoimprovetheenvironmentalawarenessofhumanbeings.Thefactoriesshouldreducethedischargeofsewageandgas.PeopleshouldlearntousecleanenergysuchasSolar,NuclearandHydrogenenergy.Thegovernmentshouldmakesomelawstobandifferentharmfulpollution.Let’schangewordsintoaction! Theearthisouronlyhome.Fromnowon。

everybodyshouldprotecttheenvironmentandwehavetheamplereasontobelievethattherewillbeabetterandbetterlivingsurroundingsforus. 批改老师 counter 级别 优秀 批改 1.…forsheisonlyhometoallpeopleslivingonit.建议此句改为:…forsheistheonlyhometoallpeoplelivingonit.这里,only前面一般是要带上修饰语的,如:theonlyperson唯一的人;myonlyson我唯一的儿子。

另外,people是一个集合名词,本身就是一个复数,“人,人们”,所以,在此没必要加上s.(但是,如果people当“民族”讲时,可是视为可数名词)。 2.What’sworse,manypeoplearecuttingtingdownincreasingnumberoftrees.我们有:anumberof大量的;numbersof大量的。但没有numberof.因此,本句可改为:What’sworse,manypeoplearecuttingdownanincreasingnumberoftrees. 参考例句(文) 1.Therefore,itisimportantforallofustoprotecttheearth。

forsheisonlyhometoallpeoplelivingonit. 2.What’sworse,manypeoplearecuttingdownanincreasingnumberoftrees,causingsoilerosion.Inaddition,themanagementofthegovernmentalsocontributestoseriouspollution.

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